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[your art is shit]

Your a fag. But here's the big secret, everyone's a fag just like you. so shut up fag. Yeah that makes sense.

dylan responds:

"let's go down to the tennis court, and talk it up like yeah"

- beyoncé, 2013

[The SIRI Project - Apple Parody (UNFINISHED)]

you shoulda finished it, you had something there, but now its just limp

FaveyOfficial responds:

I know, I know. Just began working on a "Game Grumps Animated" though, which will definitely be finished. Thanks for your words lol.

[NATA Sarcastic Inanimate Collab]

Some of these are actually pretty amazing, but some seem a bit off topic. I think a few were actually a bit lazy in their interpretation of something being sarcastic. Like some of them just seemed like objects reacting to something like a person would in that objects situation, not really being sarcastic. still the animation for all of them was actually pretty interesting and inspired. I just have trouble seeing "sarcasm" in a few of these. also that last one with the apple didn't make any sense to me, and quite frankly was underwhelming. Good Collab though :]

Pahgawk responds:

At this point the title "sarcastic" is, itself, sarcastic.

Also the apple one is a joke. At the end of every collab we add a joke one by "not clubpenguin300" in honour of the user clubpenguin300, who wanted so badly for us to make animations for him without him doing any work that we actually kind of did in these collabs. Click the heart icon next to the username on his entry to see what went down :)

[Against The Evils-Part 4]

that was actually pretty creative.
the only criticism I have is that the beginning is boring, or maybe a bit too quiet. I thought the sound was busted or something cuz that whole "fast blur" samurai guy should have had a sound effect on him or something, and maybe the kight dudes should have had some sort of rumble when they talked. I don't mean voice acting I just mean like a metal scraping sound effect or something that makes it more enjoyable.
The sound in this cartoon is kind of weird and broken to me. I get that the song is kinda to hype up the action scene and everything, but it sucks, when you realize you just put it on loop, and do the same with the cartoon or pixel movie or whatever. really the animation and story is okay for what it is, but the sound is garbage. If you had put a bit more effort into your timing of songs, and put more sound effects to imply movement or characterization I really would have enjoyed this much more.

also the story should be a little more put together than just "look at this scene, okay enough ninjas and samurais now the main character, wait no forget that idiot, focus on the two dudes fighting the one dude, and then a girl" it seems a little all over the place, at least for my taste.
also at the "end" where you panned into the words that was lame, it took me out of the movie. It made me realize I was looking at my computer screen and not having fun in the adventures of this "against the evils" world.

Its got potential, animation and everything is solid, but the rest is a little sloppy right now, and if you can just fix a few problems here and there this could be amazing

Jerry589 responds:

Your thinking is exactly the same as me. For the sound, the first 2 scenes were quietless, making anyone think that the whole video is quiet-less like that, and then the sound suddenly pops up in the 3rd scene making anyone think "hey wait, was my computer on mute or something". I'll focus on sounds by the next Chapter.

Thanks for all the compliment, after your line that the animation is good, I started feeling like, at least my animating skills have gotten better. :)

[growing seed]

Not a bad scene in mind my friend, but if you may allow me I would like to give some constructive criticism.

While it is very well timed, and has good composition, the animation is a little funky.
It doesn't exactly look too good. It sorta looks like you took one drawing and tweened it up, and erased it every once in a while to make it look like its growing out. Its not a bad idea to take a couple of shortcuts here and there, so long as the end result still looks good, but here it sorta makes the animation look just a little too mechanical.

But hey Practice makes perfect or some bullshit like that, and its actually a lot better than my first attempts so you are on your way.

joshboy101 responds:

you got it right I pretty much tweened EVERYTHING :3 the dirt splatter was the only thing that wasn't really twind together :P

[Buying A Hat]

HAHA I like it for some reason.

I know its not really super hilarious or with a lot of meaning, but it kinda has its own charm to it. I can't really explain it to much but I like how unique it is.

maybe I'm actually not sober right now, and I can't think straight who knows. Anyway, animation looked cool, and whatever it was it was at least kinda entertaining
nice man

[Logo]

For someone with the name "simple" there sure was a lot going on.
I mean you tried doing like 3 or 7 different things in one friggin logo.
I say that while it looks fantastic, It may be a bit much.
If it were me I would have just stuck with the first little "particles turning to letters thing", and maybe for different videos or cartoons or whatever I would have alternated between "particle to letters" and "letters to fire" and "fire letters to singe logo"
I understand you want to impress people, and you certainly impressed me, but don't go overboard.
All that being said, its just my opinion, it still looks phenomenal

S1mpl3Animations responds:

Thank you! I was actually with the same doubt. Perhaps I was thinking that depending on the length of the rest of the video, keeping the whole animation (for long videos) or just one of the two parts (only particles for medium size videos or only fire for short videos). It would also good to alternate between the two, I did not think of that and is a good idea, thank you!

[OTB - Knobs and Dials]

I like this
The backgrounds are very detailed, and awesome, and the sound was pretty good too.
I got to say that for a radio-tube doing laundry that was a pretty good toon

RadioTubeClock responds:

Thanks!

[300 Lip sync test]

Wow that was pretty entertaining for a test
decent lip sync, really lip sync isn't the end all of animation though, As long as it looks like they are saying what they are saying its fine.
and this was pretty good man
cheers

goodguy201 responds:

woah, thank aloot for your kind words!! And really glad you liked it!!

[Madness Random: Practice]

Not bad,
Don't put your animation skills so down, it looks just like krinkels for the most part, the only way I could tell that it wasn't is that the characters in krinkels toons are a little more "active" like even when they are standing still their hands are still moving or something.
looks good, sounds good, overal good practice, good hustle boy

As practice I say, keep practicing, this is good, but don't let that get to your head, keep practicing, and you'll get better, and better, and your cartoons will get longer, and longer

Mr-Riot-NG responds:

Okay, thank you!