Dookie-Shoes's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[P.O.V]

That was wonderful, The animation the story telling, all using sound effects, and perspective, it was simply brilliant. I got to say that all your time was well spent, it sounded good, looked good, and told a sweet little story.
Personally I could do without the words at the end, you know "show don't tell", but I loved it man

[HTMFNaF2NSA]

A star for effort, and randomness, BUT
I got to say that for some reason while I was watching it, the sound went WAY out of sync, and it made all the jokes fall flat for me, maybe take a look at that. Also a better title could have been nice. If you survive blamming, and I want to watch this again, or show it to my friends then I would literally have to remember or write down the title Hdshuagi4e98gd or whatever.
I got to say, that if you fixed the sound and title this would have been better for me

Sonicyay2 responds:

Again, it's most likely just the "Start" function of the audio. It does that for some reason if the FPS is slower than it should be or you go off it.
if i had to use fucking stream this would sound horrible

[GG animated- BUKA]

Hey that was pretty slick.
Not exactly original, making an animation of the game grumps, but it was good animation :]
Very fluid at some parts, which i think means you went literally frame by frame by frame to make something like hands look adventure time noodly.
I really thank you for that because it looks great.
If there was any criticism i can give you its that you need to clean up your animations a little bit more
Just little nuggets of imperfections here and there, and the ending animatic that asks for a replay, you can see white lines jittering around like the arms were cutaway from the still body to be animated, and then put back ever so slightly off.
all in all its pretty good

KuzummJakk responds:

:D Thank you! I commonly animate in graphics gale ^^ so I'm use to motion and inbetweens yet I hate flash as an art program. I've always had trouble really getting into it so I decided to start small with a stoopid game grumps animation xDD I'll post more original things once I get the grip of flash.
Yeah there's loads of cleanup I could of done before I posted it XD lots of extra work I could have put into it.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR CRITICISM